Avoid the ghosting. Send proposals that seal the deal.
Is your proposal actually doing the heavy lifting in your sales process, or is it leaving your dream clients confused, overwhelmed, or ghosting you entirely?
If your proposal isn’t getting the response you hoped for, you’re not alone. Even a solid discovery call can fizzle fast when the follow-up lacks clarity, confidence, or structure.
Let’s break down the biggest reasons your proposal isn’t converting and what to do instead.
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1. Confusing or Missing Pricing
Pricing is the first thing clients look for. If they can’t find it, or it feels vague or overwhelming, you’re putting a major roadblock in the way of “yes.”
Rebel Tip: Use clear, transparent pricing. Want to streamline this process? Use a CRM system like HoneyBook, Dubsado, or Aisle Planner—all of which offer customizable proposal templates with built-in pricing options (and yes, those are affiliate links because we actually use and recommend them).
2. Your Visuals Miss the Mark
Your proposal should feel like an extension of your brand, not a random Canva template you threw together.
Make it easy: Use brand-aligned Dubsado proposal templates from Search and Grow. They’re easy to use, client-friendly, and totally customizable to your business.
Proposals are about trust, and cohesive design builds trust fast.
3. It Doesn’t Sound Like You
From the first email to the final proposal, your brand voice should stay consistent. If your proposal sounds robotic, overly formal, or like it was written by someone else, it’s a disconnect.
Fix it: Use a copy style that reflects how you talk to real clients. Bonus: run it through Grammarly (it’s free) for a quick polish without losing your personality.
4. Too Many Questions, Not Enough Direction
Your proposal isn’t a quiz. Don’t overwhelm your potential client with too many choices or open-ended decisions.
Instead, lead them. Offer one clear package or a few focused options with a bold CTA: sign, pay, and get started.
5. Not Enough Info
A one-page proposal might sound sleek, but if it doesn’t answer the basic questions, like what’s included, what happens next, or how the process works, you’ll lose them.
Solution: Add a mini-FAQ section or a brief “What to Expect” timeline. This is especially key if a different person is reviewing the proposal than the one you spoke with.
6. Vague Next Steps
Don’t leave your client guessing what comes after “accept.” Be specific:
✔️ Sign the contract
✔️ Pay the retainer
✔️ Book your kickoff date
Utilize your CRM to automate this workflow, allowing clients to receive confirmation and next steps instantly. Not sure where to start? Check out our blog post: Choosing the Right CRM for Your Business.
Rebel tip: Always add an expiration date to your proposal. It creates urgency and protects you if your offer or availability changes.
7. It’s Hard to Navigate
Keep it simple. No one wants to scroll through 20 pages of fluff. Use headers, bullet points, and short sections to guide your reader.
Make your call-to-action loud and clear: Are they booking or not?
8. You Waited Too Long to Send It
The #1 proposal killer? Waiting too long to send it. In today’s world, speed builds trust. You don’t need to make it perfect—you need to make it happen.
Use your CRM to create reusable templates and auto-fill fields so you can send a professional, polished proposal in minutes. Read more on creating a proposal in 5 minutes or less here.
Bonus: What Else Should Be in Your Proposal?
A well-crafted proposal should include:
✔️ Branded visuals and fonts
✔️ Clear deliverables and pricing
✔️ Easy-to-read layout
✔️ Expiration date
✔️ FAQs or “What’s Next” section
✔️ Call to action (book now, pay deposit, etc.)
Want to take it further? Read our blog post on How to Create a Rock-Solid Proposal to learn how to write one that stands out and sells.
Proposals That Convert
Your proposal isn’t just a quote—it’s a critical part of the client experience. When done right, it builds confidence, answers questions, and makes it easy for your dream clients to say yes.Need help building better systems behind your proposals?
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